Monday, November 26, 2007

Chapter 1

Its five in the evening she stumbles out of bed eyes all weary n tired , she tries to take out her slippers from under the bed "hmm just a lil more ...there got it". She puts on her favorite pink robe which feels cold against her warm body fresh out of the warmth of her mink blanket. She walks towards the bathroom and opens the door it creaks loudly "note to self, i really need to oil this bloody thing" .
She turns on the tap and brushes her teeth. She looks at herself in the mirror "hmmm gt some dark circles, maybe i should quit smoking" , she opens her medicine cabinet and takes out her medicated soap and washed her face with it and put on some lactokelamine.
She stepped into the shower and pured some water on herself "man its cold, i need that geyser" , stepping out of the shower she fumbled her for her towel which was hanging on the latch.She comes out of the shower shivering with cold and the cold floor gives no comfort either.
She opens her cabinet and looks at her clothes though she has only three pair of jeans and a few tees , she tries hard to match some clothes for the evening. "next year i will have to get a few dresses" .She quickly puts on her clothes though she has no sweater she has one new denim jacket which she was gifted by some aunt.
She moves towards her shoe cabinet well not really a cabinet more a fruit box which she bought from a fruit vendor."hmmm what should i wear today,lemme see shoes or flipflop" after a quick decision she slips on her heels and ties them up.
She goes to her mirror and takes out her vanity box and puts on her bright red lipstick as today is a special day for her, she applies some blush and combs her hair and ties it in a pony. She puts some kajal in her eyes and she gives herself a quick dekko of herself in the mirror. She is nearing 25 but she still looks 18 though she has some dark circles and some bruises yet some concealer and few strokes of her brush could do the job of hiding her blemishes.

9 comments:

Blueangel said...

What were YOU doing there PERV? :|

Florence R. said...

heels are shoes :|
u cud've said flip-flops or flats :|

n add more adjectives...they're a vital part of narratives.

n get rid of word verifiction =)

Miss. Mystic said...

@bluey i was jst lookin thru the window...
@floey oh i c... will do

Anon said...

....thats it? or is thr a continuing post around the corner? :O
like the description. :)

Miss. Mystic said...

yes it is!!! i will make a story outta of it...i really strtd it wid a blank page n now i hav a post

Sherry Ong said...

i like ya character. she's vain! :)

My Foot? said...

ooooh! I have that feeling, she'z gonna be one of those characters.. the kind you least expect.. looking forward to the next part..

dump the word verification, seriously.. typing 'zbwni' feels weird :|

Miss. Mystic said...

do u still gt dat? ok leme take it off

krist0ph3r said...

nice!!! and i can see you've inspired the shmoo to start short-storying too!!

take a bow...and keep writing!!!